The clock keeps ticking…
Clear and loud inside your head;
It is perhaps the echo of a pounding heart.
In this solemn silence,
Drops of water ‘crash’ onto the sink…
There is a sudden confusion…
As you lie motionless, almost dead;
Reality and illusion cannot be told apart.
‘Suspended’, you panic,
For you now attempt to think…
Mild at first, but soon profound…
This ‘numbness’ begins to spread;
The world around you turns into Modern Art.
You are captive, ‘trapped’ –
You can neither speak nor blink…
The minutes seem like hours…
In this dreary realm of dread.
The ‘disease’ then begins to depart;
And leaves your bewildered mind wondering:
What on Earth was in that drink!
9 comments:
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Very nice!
Ha! Ha! Good one :D
I can see of late your satires are good. Keep going... nice one.
I can see of late your satires are good. Keep going... nice one.
Good one :D :D :D
Wow! Real good! -- Bhaswar
@rainmaker, rupa, bikram, arka, bhaswar - thanks a tonne! was experimenting a little with the structure this time round.
That was real good, Sourav! Excellent observation and articulation of feelings. What was in the drink, by the way? :)
»Soumendra
you are really good...keep going
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