Wednesday, November 24, 2010

...high!

The clock keeps ticking…

Clear and loud inside your head;

It is perhaps the echo of a pounding heart.

In this solemn silence,

Drops of water ‘crash’ onto the sink…


There is a sudden confusion…

As you lie motionless, almost dead;

Reality and illusion cannot be told apart.

‘Suspended’, you panic,

For you now attempt to think…


Mild at first, but soon profound…

This ‘numbness’ begins to spread;

The world around you turns into Modern Art.

You are captive, ‘trapped’ –

You can neither speak nor blink…


The minutes seem like hours…

In this dreary realm of dread.

The ‘disease’ then begins to depart;

And leaves your bewildered mind wondering:

What on Earth was in that drink!

9 comments:

Romit said...

:D

Very nice!

Rupa said...

Ha! Ha! Good one :D

IceX said...

I can see of late your satires are good. Keep going... nice one.

IceX said...

I can see of late your satires are good. Keep going... nice one.

Angry Voices said...

Good one :D :D :D

Anonymous said...

Wow! Real good! -- Bhaswar

Unknown said...

@rainmaker, rupa, bikram, arka, bhaswar - thanks a tonne! was experimenting a little with the structure this time round.

Anonymous said...

That was real good, Sourav! Excellent observation and articulation of feelings. What was in the drink, by the way? :)
»Soumendra

aditi said...

you are really good...keep going